we had to do a water density experiment here is a video showing my idea

1st draft

The camp was not the best or even near a fun camp, it was all extremely boring  but the exciting thing was going home.

I Woke up at 6 am with

Mr Wood singing ‘good morning good morning we slept the whole night threw good morning good morning to you’ it was bloody annoying, then talked to Bauldrick aka Harry for a bit, which was probably the most exciting thing on camp! Then we had to sweep and i basically did everything, then Mr Becwith  waults on in and leaves a trail of grass and god knows what else on our cabin floor when i confronted him about it he just said, ‘no it wasnt me because im a good person’ oh  bullshivers i thought, i clearly saw the grass and whatever the other stuff was fall off his shoe!!! And then Mr Wood running around like a mad man with a broom, took awhile to get him for a final inspection, finally done we head to the hall dining thing. breakfast was the same, damn boring then bible crap even more boring the trip home was boring, having to sit next to Zak, which wouldnt be a bad thing if he hadn't kept saying ‘be like cool kids, like cool kids’ and it got worse at one stage he took his shirt off!! Finally got home, ahhhh got to relax.

1.finally going home

waking up at 6 am with Mr Wood singing!!! `good morning good morning we slept the whole night through good morning good morning to you!` it was bloody annoying

got up and talked to Bauldrik for a bit aka Harry about going home

sweeping, then Mr B comes in and makes more mess to sweep!

he had mud and everything on his shoes. he left a trail of mud and grass on our cabin floor. when i asked him about the mess he said that he didn’t do it because he’s a good person but i clearly saw the grass come off his shoe

finally had breakfast, toast and porridge, were i went up to the lady to put my plate away and she gave me 2 scoops of poridge!!  and doing bible stuff which was very extremely boring!

arrived at school and went home oh goody!!

By Shaun, this is a draft if anyone has any thoughts, comments, or  ideas please let me know. oh and how do you spell poridgge!!!